I received an Advanced Reader's Copy of this book in return for promising to do a review on it, so here's the review, at long last. I'll p
The Fourth Nephite, by Jeffrey S. Savage
I’ll admit it, when I first read the title, I imagined a kid going back in time to the age of the Three Nephites and becoming their young sidekick for a while. I was a bit surprised to find out that the protagonist of this story goes back to the time of Joseph Smith – but I wasn’t disappointed. This book is unique in its premise; instead of having Kaleo Steele go back in time by accident and flounder around until he finds his way home again, he’s deliberately sent there with a quest to fulfill before he can return. He’s on a journey of faith, trying to gain the knowledge that he needs, and this knowledge, or at least the opportunities of getting it, are symbolized by the parts of the key that he must collect and fit together before he can open the door that leads back to the future.
I really liked the character of Kaleo, the way he’s so focused on football at the beginning of the story. Although he goes to seminary, his heart isn’t really in it, and he’s more inclined to think of the entire Book of Mormon thing as some kind of fantastical fairy tale. He’s a good athlete, yet shy around girls, becoming tongue-tied when faced with one close-up. Each chapter starts with some of his wry observations, many of which made me smile. His football skills help him out when he runs into the gang of ruffians that are after Joseph Smith and the golden plates, but he also has weaknesses along with his strengths. I think teenage readers of both sexes will be able to identify with him – I know I certainly could, even though I’m much older and don’t even like football.
I personally wasn’t in much doubt about the ultimate ending, but I certainly enjoyed Kaleo’s journey of getting there. I liked the inclusion of Sally Chase and her peepstone, and sinister Alastair Blackburn, both showing the true nature of the forces working against Joseph Smith. Jennie was also a great character, and I think the author showed us a good portrait of both Joseph and Hyrum Smith as well.
There was a little Savage-style cliffhanger at the end of each chapter to keep you wanting to read more, and although the book itself was a relatively fast and easy read, I didn’t think it was too skimpy when it came to details or characters.
The signs on the walls with different sayings reminded me a little of the library organization system from Umberto Eco’s The Name of the Rose. Those sayings might seem random now, but I’m sure that there must be some kind of code behind them. But what I really liked was the way that the lights changed as Kaleo went down the tunnels to the wooden door, fluorescent lights giving way to single bulbs and then gas lights. I thought that was a great and subtle touch of showing Kaleo going back in time.
Receiving a free copy of this book did not influence my opinion in any way.